I wrote this myself but have not recorded yet Need constructive criticism for a rap i wrote

Tekst piosenki

[Verse 1: Myself]

Yall can’t fuck wit’ a
Candor like dis, like dis
The truth gun kill em dead
I don’t need no bullets holmes
Im shitting all on emm cuz of a
Lack of brains in they head, ya
Its so easy, when im weezing
Cuz my weeds betta’ than bread an’ sum
Buttuh, like your bitch, askin’ me to fuck her but
She ain’t look good, so.. where the nearest dumpster? (haha)
You could call me a fucker, me, I just don’t curr
I’m here to watch this world burn
You hear my stern tone with erry word
And i ain’t even start to rehcord..
Yet..

I wrote it myself this morning. I can probably write better than I can really rap right now doe, so I’m looking to improve
Now, is this any good? Some constructive feedback would be much appreciated! Thanks in advance